I’ve completed the rewrite to The Red Shoe. I had some help from my friend Brian who is in law enforcement. He pointed out several errors I made in police nominclature and a few others have made suggestions. The rewrite includes a new opening which gets the story started sooner.
The second book in the series has been edited by me and I will print it tomorrow at Office Depot to read it out loud and show a few people for critiquing purposes. So far those who have read the first book have enjoyed it even though it had some errors that needed correcting. I think the second book will be better written if not better plotted.
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